Friday, December 05, 2008

"The Race"

Bike riding feels like the wind
blowing in my cold ear

It sounds like a white wolf
howling at night

I see the big mountain
with my bright eyes

I taste victory
when I start a race

It smells like maple syrup in the sky

-

Jason Z. age 8 years
Matamoras, PA
Taking Care, 2008 December

2 comments:

sararah said...

*snap*snap*snap*

I really do like the line "It smells like maple syrup in the sky." Some delicious imagery there :)

Eric A. said...

Awesome!